Is nobody paying attention?

This is PART 1 OF THREE, the next two parts will be coming out within 24 HOURS! Stop complaining about the length!

Absolutely gorgeous, very professional all around. You have perfected your animation techniques. Voice acting was far ahead of newgrounds par. Storyboarding was perfect. Timing was perfect. You didn't linger on a background just because it took you a long time to make it. Stylized very professionally. The storyline was somewhat unlikely, but relevant enough to real world events to be just a little scary. I can't wait to see the rest of the episode.

My only suggestion would be that in the future, you contact newgrounds to see if you can upload an entire episode at once despite the large file size. I'm sure they would be willing to make an exception for you.

Good but

I think a change of subject matter is in order. At times your work comes off a little arrogant and pretentious. Much of that comes from the fact that your flash is about you. I think it's about time you took yourself out of your animations. It's just not a good idea to break the fourth wall like that.

Apart from that the graphics are awsome, the sound quality is high, though the voice acting could use a little more feeling, and the animation is pretty good. I just think a little change of pace is needed.

Well done

This was pretty funny. The outrageous political commentary at the end made me chuckle. I won't complain about you ripping off the original banana phone cartoon because it was a tribute. The very ending was somewhat of a suprise, and funnier for it's complete impossibility.

Your work would benefit from some study of the human form. Most things looked good on their own but the proportions threw things off. At times the head seemed too small and the arms too long. I was going to provide you with a link, but apparently that's not allowed. Just do a google search on figure drawing or human proportions and it'll be easy to find something.

It's more important to stick to the same proportions throughout the movie then it is to get them perfectly right, as that is part of your artistic style. But I did notice they seemed to change a little throughout the movie.

It could also use a little more frame by frame animation, but I'm working on one right now and I can understand why somebody wouldn't want to. Tweening is fine for most things, but for action scenes frame by frame makes things so much better. I did see some of it and good job with it.

A few suggestions

First, the graphics could use a tune up. As somebody else had suggested, a distance counter would be nice, or perhaps some other methods of scoring points (perhaps collect some objects of some kind). I don't think that the "lives" meter was an appropriate name, because normally a life is something you lose and then start a level over with. Health would probably be a better label. All in all well done but give it a tune up and expand the game to incorporate more levels.

Epic

This game was awsome. The bosses were the best, the music was good, the levels were hard, and I liked the secrets. I'm glad you didn't use sprites. The gameplay was good. There were a few problems with collision detection, especially with the purple yoshis. Sometimes when you jumped on top of something you would fall through it and it would hurt or kill you. Other then that great game.

I gave it a 2

Which means i was rooting for it to stay in the portal but with a low score. decent programing skills, fair graphics, but these types of games get so old.

Very good

Almost too dynamic to be called trance. True it did have the "vwodudududlum" noise playing the whole time, but there were at least three breakdowns that all had a different feel to them, and there were so many things going on in the background that it was very alive. That's why I gave you a 10 for diversity.